雅思写作7分作文的解析

雅思7分作文范文解读：

　　Taking Stance-Format 4:Advantage and Disadvantage

　　Sample Question 1

　　Somepeople live in one community for their entire lives.Many more move at leastonce,while others quite often.

　　What are the advantages and disadvantagesof these two different modes of life?Give your reasons and examples.

　　Sample Question 1:Brainstorming

　　Key words

　　•ŸCommunity

　　•Ÿ____________

　　Related issues

　　•Ÿlifestyle

　　•Ÿ____________

　　Positive Side

　　•ŸEnjoy better living environment

　　•Ÿ____________

　　Negative Side

　　•ŸParting with relatives and old friends

　　•Ÿ____________

　　Sample Question 1:Essay plan

　　Main Body 1-Topic Sentence

　　The most advantage to moving house isthat__________________________ However,there are alsodisadvantages___________________

　　Main Body 2-Topic Sentence

　　Similarly,there are many benefits______________________________

　　Sample Essay 1:Introduction

　　S1 For manypeople,moving house is one of the vicissitudes of their lives and it happensfor various reasons:lower rent

　　Sample Essay 1:Mainbody 1

　　Sample Essay 1:Mainbody 2

　　by dwelling in one community from the cradle to the grave,a majordrawback that often associates with never changing one’s domicile and socialenvironment is that life may become colorless and monotonous after many yearsof routine living.S5 More often than not,prejudice and provincialism.