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雅思7分作文范文如下:

 

  Taking Stance-Format 4:Advantage and Disadvantage

 

  Sample Question 1

 

  Somepeople live in one community for their entire lives.Many more move at leastonce,while others quite often.

 

  What are the advantages and disadvantagesof these two different modes of life?Give your reasons and examples.

 

  Sample Question 1:Brainstorming

 

  Key words

 

  •ŸCommunity

 

  •Ÿ____________

 

  Related issues

 

  •Ÿlifestyle

 

  •Ÿ____________

 

  Positive Side

 

  •ŸEnjoy better living environment

 

  •Ÿ____________

 

  Negative Side

 

  •ŸParting with relatives and old friends

 

  •Ÿ____________

 

  Sample Question 1:Essay plan

 

  Main Body 1-Topic Sentence

 

  The most advantage to moving house isthat__________________________ However,there are alsodisadvantages___________________

 

  Main Body 2-Topic Sentence

 

  Similarly,there are many benefits______________________________

 

  Sample Essay 1:Introduction

 

  Sample Essay 1:Mainbody 1

 

  S1 The mostobvious advantage to moving house is that people can live in a new social andnatural environment,which is often safer,the very reason that appeals to them in the firstplace.S3 Also.

 

  Sample Essay 1:Mainbody 2

 

  S1 Similarly,there are many benefits attached to sticking to one locale forever.S2Because a person’s old neighborhood is usually the place where he was born andgrew up,,by dwelling in one community from the cradle to the grave,a majordrawback that often associates with never changing one’s domicile and socialenvironment is that life may become colorless and monotonous after many yearsof routine living.S5 More often than notprejudice and provincialism.